Given that I'll probably not be published anytime soon and that I'm going to read this in my daughter's class tomorrow--I'm publishing this here and now. Critiques are most welcome. Rhonwyn’s Closet Can you keep a secret? You’ve got to promise not to tell anyone. OK, here, look in my closet. Creepy, huh? Well, it all started when… “Rhonwyn, have you cleaned up after Jasper yet?” my mommy asked me. “Of course, Mommy.” “Really?” Her left eyebrow always looked bent like a caterpillar when she didn’t believe me. “Yes, the yard doesn’t even look like a dog lives there. Except for the dog house with the red roof.” “All right,” she smiled, “Go on and play.” I ran up to my bedroom. The truth was I hadn’t picked up after Jasper. I didn’t want to do it then, I’d do it later. So I opened my closet and reached up to get a game off of the top shelf when something
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